Losperman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chrono Trigger: My Return]

Getting there...

...but the spelling and grammar errors still bug me. :( Maybe it's just me, but it takes away a little bit of the "authentic" feel. I liked that you drew the closeups, though. I'd like to see a comedic take on the Chrono Trigger series as well. That would be peachy keen. But good job sticking with the CT stuff. <3

Mystic-Skye responds:

well im not a comedic person so I cant do comedy all that well maybe if i had help but if it wasnt chrono trigger im sure I could!

[CT: Fall of Guardia Part1]

The black wind falls silent

Wow, that was pretty sweet. I don't watch as much Flash as I used to, but I saw your sig on the BBS and was compelled to watch this. I was not disappointed, as you did such a great job. Very well written and put together, the sprites were animated perfectly, sound and effects were used well, quality story line... Very deserving of a 10. Looking forward to the rest of the series, keep up the excellent work!

Vinstigator responds:

It's always good to get a positive review from an NG veteran like yourself :)

I guess the advertising in my sig paid off. I thought no one really pays attention to the sigs, but it looks like I was wrong. Thank you for the support and encouragement. Stay tuned for part 2.

-Vince

[Chrono Trigger X 2]

Same suggestions...

Your story was somewhat better in this one, but the spelling and grammar still took a lot away from the story-telling aspect since it was all in text. And there were a lot of graphical errors that could have been fixed. I liked the flash of Crono's face as Serge stabs him near the end, but the art Crono is drawn in really clashes with the pixels of the rest of the movie. Like I said, the story is better, but there are some cosmetic items that need to be adjusted in the next one.

Mystic-Skye responds:

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[Chrono Trigger X 1]

Magus cannot fall...

Well, in a text-based movie, spelling and grammar play a vital role in how the story is presented. The abundant spelling errors detracted from your movie a lot. :( You started out spelling Crono's name wrong, only to correct it halfway through the movie. That was the biggest, but there were many more. And the plot was a little contorted... I like how you tried to make it complex, but it kinda fell apart with the ending. :(

Mystic-Skye responds:

oh ok thanks for the review though.

[Old: Woah Cool]

Well made

A good spin on the art of stick animation. I have to admit, when I saw the stick guy sitting on the couch I almost closed the window. But I gave it a chance, and am glad I did. I liked the style you used, and your transitioning of scenes was smooth like butta. Nice job, keep up the good work.

ZT responds:

lol, really? The couch almost made you blam it??

I thought it was well drawn... oh well

Thanks for the review!

[Sander]

OMGWTF

This one time, in 8th grade, this kid totally pulled my pants down in front of the whole class and I would have beat him up if it weren't for Mr. Bahde. True story. Oh, I liked your movie too. <3

Goatpower responds:

Losperman, you are a true friend! <3

[Castlevania-OofI]

Thith ith clathic!

Ass? Yeah, you kicked it. Good job. Sprites, when used correctly, can be funny as shit, and I think you pulled it off nicely. You also had a nice plot curve, beginning at a slower pace and picking things up towards the middle and end. And your comedy wasn't dry, either, as seen in numerous Flash movies. And the part where Belmont puked? Classic. Two claws up. :)

gank responds:

i'd have to say that i love this review. but next time you praise, remember the game and music video in the special features! =) thanks

[eye of teh clock]

It's fifen-o-clock

That was awesome, my friend. A lot of the artwork and animation was creative and original. Smooth, interesting, well-played out... a job extremely well done. I dub thee fifened. {{{Clocks}}} <3

arreon-clock responds:

YAY