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[Chrono Trigger X 2]

Same suggestions...

Your story was somewhat better in this one, but the spelling and grammar still took a lot away from the story-telling aspect since it was all in text. And there were a lot of graphical errors that could have been fixed. I liked the flash of Crono's face as Serge stabs him near the end, but the art Crono is drawn in really clashes with the pixels of the rest of the movie. Like I said, the story is better, but there are some cosmetic items that need to be adjusted in the next one.

Mystic-Skye responds:

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[Chrono Trigger X 1]

Magus cannot fall...

Well, in a text-based movie, spelling and grammar play a vital role in how the story is presented. The abundant spelling errors detracted from your movie a lot. :( You started out spelling Crono's name wrong, only to correct it halfway through the movie. That was the biggest, but there were many more. And the plot was a little contorted... I like how you tried to make it complex, but it kinda fell apart with the ending. :(

Mystic-Skye responds:

oh ok thanks for the review though.

[Old: Woah Cool]

Well made

A good spin on the art of stick animation. I have to admit, when I saw the stick guy sitting on the couch I almost closed the window. But I gave it a chance, and am glad I did. I liked the style you used, and your transitioning of scenes was smooth like butta. Nice job, keep up the good work.

ZT responds:

lol, really? The couch almost made you blam it??

I thought it was well drawn... oh well

Thanks for the review!

[Sander]

OMGWTF

This one time, in 8th grade, this kid totally pulled my pants down in front of the whole class and I would have beat him up if it weren't for Mr. Bahde. True story. Oh, I liked your movie too. <3

Goatpower responds:

Losperman, you are a true friend! <3

[the world as we know it]

Swizzles

Well, I think I got lost somewhere, but the ending seemed to bring it all into perspective. :( is life, is it not? And life is :(. Deep, man... deep. :D

[Chrono Trigger: Betrayel]

Short, underdeveloped, but still pretty damn good

You had a few text problems with spelling and such, and the story could have been a little more drawn out and detailed. But the fight scene was great, and the ability to choose an ending was not only cool, but also lent to the spirit of the game the movie was based on. Very nice job.

[The Trouble With Trobbles]

First submission, eh?

Well it's a pretty damn good way to start. Character animations were good for the most part, sound (KMFDM and Prince = Sweeet) was great, and it was pretty damn humorous for a short. The only thing I'd suggest improving is the backgrounds, but it doesn't take much away from the movie. {{{}}}

[Castlevania-OofI]

Thith ith clathic!

Ass? Yeah, you kicked it. Good job. Sprites, when used correctly, can be funny as shit, and I think you pulled it off nicely. You also had a nice plot curve, beginning at a slower pace and picking things up towards the middle and end. And your comedy wasn't dry, either, as seen in numerous Flash movies. And the part where Belmont puked? Classic. Two claws up. :)

gank responds:

i'd have to say that i love this review. but next time you praise, remember the game and music video in the special features! =) thanks

[Alli-Girl]

Illegally Blonde?

Although it seems like a rip-off of Legally Blonde 2, as a Flash, it's pretty good. Most of the animation and artwork is nice, very fluid and detailed. And the presentation of the whole thing was executed nicely. Good job. I'll be interested to see your next movie.

[eye of teh clock]

It's fifen-o-clock

That was awesome, my friend. A lot of the artwork and animation was creative and original. Smooth, interesting, well-played out... a job extremely well done. I dub thee fifened. {{{Clocks}}} <3

arreon-clock responds:

YAY